Writing is one of those things that can come easy for some.
But for others, it comes a little harder.
Your instincts are built into your psyche to let you know when something isn't quite right.
Use those same instincts in your writing.
Writing is done by feeling your way through your story. Some use outlines to keep them on track but when you are writing, have you ever found yourself talking out loud or acting out a scene?
This is your instinct telling you that maybe it might not work out that way. Maybe someone wouldn't say a certain sentence or phrase that way or maybe a violent scene needs to acted out so as to be realistic.
In writing, don't fall so in love with your characters that you can't erase or delete them before your novel is completed.
Trust your instincts in this as well.
Even that scene that you loved writing might need to go. Ask yourself the following questions if your 'instinct' is telling you that something is not right.
1. Did this event slow down the scene?
2. Can this scene be told in a flashback or memory?
3. Why do I need this scene in the novel?
If you answer yes to any of those questions, your instinct knows what needs to happen.
Writing is about following your heart but also following your instinct.
What is your instinct telling you right now about what you are currently working on?